Escapement follows three separate but intertwining story-lines of Paulina (a village girl with great powers), AL- Wazir (a british aerostat officer) and Childress (a librarian turned secret order diplomat). They make their way either by foot, airship or by boat across strange version of Earth. An Earth where a giant 100 mile thick wall divides the northern and southern hemispheres and the moon and planets travel along visible clockwork tracks.

What’s Good About the Story

The character of Paolina was the only storyline that had any intrigue. Al Wazir added little to the story and Childress character added absolutely nothing. Poalina has the ability to create little mechanical watch type objects called “gleams” which allow her to control the world around her. This was by far the most interesting concept in the story and is unfortunate it didn’t come to light until late in the story. As Paolina travels she has to call on this ability often with deadly affects.

A literal clockwork world where the planets travel on tracks and a giant wall spans the equator also adds the the intrigue of the world. The rest of the world is a little boring. There is a clockwork man city along the wall but and a giant fish king town but too much of the world seems to be ground in mudane reality.

The Bad

This story is borders on boring. Airship and submarine journeys make for boring story telling and this story is full of them. Eventhough The story has moments of great imagination like Al-Wazir and Boaz(The Automaton) battling an fish king it only makes up a small portion of the actual story. Escapement is written as a second book in a trilogy were nothing is resolved and the characters are brought to their darkest points. Unfortunately the journey to get to this dark point is uneventful and boring.


The story leaves off as Paolina crosses to the Southern Hemisphere and encounters a brass angel. This is most insidious being the most intriguing part of the book and forcing the reader to read the next book in the series Pinion.